HERE ARE MY GENERAL COMMENTS:
- PLEASE IMPROVE YOUR GENERAL PRESENTATION
- ILLUSTRATE THEM MORE (ADD PICTURES, TABLES, CHARTS, ETC.)
- USE http://www.reverso.com/ TO TRANSLATE BUSINESS WORDS, PLEASE DO NOT INVENT WORDS OR USE FRENCH ONES
- FOCUS MORE ON THE MOST IMPORTANT FACTS AND DEVELOP THEM MORE
- ATTENTION TO GRAMMAR
- ATTENTION TO SPELLING (CHECK IT ON WORD)
- ATTENTION TO PROOFREADING (READ IT BEFORE)
- TO FINISH I WAS HAPPY WITH YOUR WORKS BUT WE HAVE TO DO BETTER
- FOR COMPUB: YOU HAVE TO PRINT YOUR EXECUTIVE SUMMARY AND INCLUDE IT WITH YOUR OPERATIONS MANAGEMENT EXAM (NO MORE EMAILS)
CONCERNING THE EXAM - GO STRAIGHT TO THE POINT, NO CHIT CHAT
- GIVE EXAMPLES
- BE CLEAR AND SHORT